Friday, July 10, 2009

Another Prome....



Surprised at the response for my last post, my first Prome( all rights reserved) ... I decided to work on a new one... It might sound like sumthin u hav read sumwhr, but i assure u its sumthin i wrote.. original.. fresh frm my mind... jus put the thoughts into words....( jumbled up)...but its a prome all right... :)




I d like to take Life…

One day at a time…

Sprinkled with some sugar…

N a tiny pinch of salt…



You could add some spice…

To liven up things…

N Sometimes for reasons unknown...

It turns out to be bitter…



I d like some hope…

To see the brighter side…

N learn to wait…

For better times…



Some faith

To give me strength…

N not lose my heart…

When I fail a step…



A little love…

A little care…

To keep me going…

Through out the ride…



A drop of tear…

To wash my eyes every now n then…

So that I can view the world,

With clearer eyes…



And most importantly…

A smile…

From the people…

Who matter the most.


8 comments:

Shanu said...

Nice..well said!!

Dhanya said...

A drop of tear…
To wash my eyes every now n then…
So that I can view the world,
With clearer eyes…

<<< Loved this line! :)

Aw.S.M said...

We u sure have me smiling :)...

Real cute poem yaar...will make everyone who reads this smile :).

U just described the different ingredients which should make up everyones life. It is indeed original :)

luv
amith

Lakshmi said...

@ Shanu
Thank U :)

@ Dhanya
Thts my favorite stanza too...:)

@Amith
Thanks a lot :)

blunt edges said...

does every line of d "prome" hv 2 end wid "..."??? ;)

neat :)

Lakshmi said...

Hi hi.. I guess its a mannerism I have...( its always 3 dots)... :)

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