Friday, July 3, 2009

A LOVE PROME....( Love???)


I wil continue my skooling her story in a matter of few days... scribbled sumthing which i thot is even more interesting...


Dedicated to the love and light of (many people’s) life(s)…


Don’t get me wrong… It may be utter nonsense… but its wat I feel.. This is not romantic crap.. nor is it a fancy work.. these r jus feelings, put into jumbled words…this is wat I ve seen a lot of girls say n feel….this is a common scene I see everyday…




N Btb this is new form of putting Literature… Its called PROME… I named it coz I found it.. N I am the first one to write it… It’s a fusion btwn prose and poetry…


Oh.. The early days…

The twinkle in your eyes…

The smile on your face…

N those sweet words which followed…



That was when I thought…

Tht its all bout Love,honey…

N my future… wil be a big black hole

Without your divine presence…



No, I have not fallen out of love…

I never can… Its been just you…over the years…n forever

I have learnt to care…

Beyond all limits…

Coz sharing and caring for each other…

Is what love is supposed to be all bout…



Is the magic over?

I wonder sometimes…

I know I must not grumble

Coz a change is always inevitable…

But I jus cant stop wishing…

That things were the same again…



I have learnt to listen…

To whatever u have to say…

I have learnt not to argue…

Coz it is of no good…

I have learnt to understand…

Whatever you do…

Coz it is now that I realized

That guys are made this way…

N whatever I do…

You ll never change…



You were there,

Most of the time…( Underlined in RED)

To listen to my banter,

When I grumble non stop

To lend an ear,

When I pour out my woes…

To offer words of comfort,

Whenevr I was feeling down…



U made me smile...

After the endless stream of tears…

You stood by me…

During those intolerable mood swings

And drastic emotional out bursts…

( Yea, sumtimes being a female has its own disadvantages)

And for that I knw, You deserve

A Nobel… for Patience, if it exists…



But…

I wish You understand…

Atleast for once,

How it is to be ME…

I wish you realize…

How much I hate…

Being told what to do…



I don’t mind you being possessive,

As long as you don’t invade my space…

You know I am yours

For this lifetime…

Then why the hell are you acting so???



I m not a little birdie..

Who wishes to be caged..

I am not ready to sing

For your ears alone…

I want to be set free…

I wish to live life…

My Way…



N dearest, if u try to hold me back…

I cant assure you I ll stay…

I will try to break away…

Coz how much ever I love you…

Its my freedom which is at stake…



Just for once…

You could try to understand…

How it is to be ME…



You have never kissed me hard,

You have never hugged me tight…

Hell!!! U ve never even held me close…

[ all this coz I ve never given u a chance to, thts also true]



But when all is said and done….

I wish to stay with you…

Remain a part of you…

Coz I happen to be in LOVE with you…

15 comments:

blunt edges said...

i dunno how 2 react...u bein sarcastic abt luv ya u glorifyin it?

n wats luv without d hard kiss n d tight hug???

neverthless d best "prome" i hv ever read :D:D:D

ahhh...2 be in luv :D

Chip said...

wat??
okay now , tell me who else stole my friends password??
(or is it really u??)
a poem!!!
OH MY GOD!!!
i know u r crazy abt that guy but..god!! a poem??
two words... well done..
the ending..
"Coz I happen to be in LOVE with you…"..
blew the roof off my floors..
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..
..
(okay stop blushin..i jus happened to be in a good mood..its no good..)
:)
loved it

Lakshmi said...

@ BE... Evn I dont know wat exactly I hav done... I am sure being sarcastic... but its true isnt??? Love isnt all fun...nope, not at all...

@ Chip or Nitz...
I hate callin u Chip..its absurd n with Joey thr.. na... so U liked it??? Wow... Thanch u.. U knw exactly how i feel.. n y i wrote this way...:)

Lakshmi said...

n Mr. Blunt Edges... Love is not always bout kisses n hugs... u knw and the 'physical stuff'... U can fall in love with sumone u havent ever seen...:)

Shanu said...

I m not a little birdie.. Who wishes to be caged.. I am not ready to sing For your ears alone… I want to be set free… I wish to live life… My Way…

N dearest, if u try to hold me back… I cant assure you I ll stay… I will try to break away… Coz how much ever I love you… Its my freedom which is at stake…


Very well said..so very true!!

Lakshmi said...

Thank you Shano.. I guess all gals r gonna find this true... guys!!! pah...:)

Beauty and the BEast said...

Prome eh?

Love the concept!!

Somehow it should be Prome = 'LONG' Poem :p

But then I suppose to really put into words something as magical and as confusing as 'LOVE', would well.. require a Prome!

Lakshmi said...

I dont really believe tht all poems shud rhyme.. or hav rhyming words... since many ppl think so n i find majority of the poems with atleast one set of rhyming words, I concluded tht my work wasnt a pome..It wasnt prose either...but yes, It was loooong... so I named it Prome...:)

gayathri-vishwanathan said...

wow...i loved this cmpletely! clap! clap! wunder wen on d earth will i ever write such stuff

Lakshmi said...

Wow... Tht was very flattering indeed... Thank you swthrt...:)

blunt edges said...

hmmm...i knw :)

ItAteMyBrain said...

Do all gals hate possesive guys.
And do u mean to say you are ready to pay the price of freedom for ur love???

Lakshmi said...

Well... i guess its upto u... I wudnt want sumone to be over possessive n try to take control over my life...
I d rather live life my way than try to act like wat he wants me to be...every person is an individual n their interests must be respected..always...
But... its true wat they say i guess.. love is blind... mayb u din note my last para...
"But when all is said and done…. I wish to stay with you… Remain a part of you… Coz I happen to be in LOVE with you…"

gkam said...

good stuff

very nice!

keep the promes coming! :)

Lakshmi said...

Thanks Gauri... :)