Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Make My Day !!!





Give me a smile…
Sing me a song…
Hug me tight…
Keep me close….






Walk with me…
Hold my hands…
Tell me a joke…
Hear me laugh…












Sit by me,
Silently…
And let me know…
You like me…











Take me to the ocean…
To watch the waves…
The dipping sun…
And the salty air…








Listen to me talk…
Look and nod…
Tell me stories…
I d love to hear…









Lend me a shoulder
To cry upon…
When something happens
That tears me apart…








Tell me you love me
That you care…
And whatever happens,
You’ll be there…










This is what it takes…
To make my day…
Simple though it may seem…
No one seems to care…

21 comments:

Jidhu Jose said...

Wow...its cool...I like it

DuDo said...

Nice list, wish u a lucky day!!! !!!! Hope this comment makes your day!!! :)

blunt edges said...

sweet n simple :)

Raksha Ramachandra said...

nice lines!
simple things make a day:)
Have a nice day:)!

Cheers:)

Lakshmi said...

@ JJ
Thank you :)

Lakshmi said...

@ Dudo
It sure did :)

Lakshmi said...

@ BE
Glad u liked it :)

Lakshmi said...

@ Raksha
Thanks a lot... :D

Renju said...

Cute lines..just like the words spoken from a little child..

leks said...

AWWW!

thank you for commenting up there or would have not arrived here so soon ^-^

I can sooo relate to this poem..

Innocence personified with amazing dignity!

A hug for you..( that's my trademark you see :D )

Loved it!

Lakshmi said...

@ Leks
Hey... Thanks a lot.. U sure did make my day :D
A hug back :)

arvind said...

ho! its so nice..

buckingfastard said...

luvd the simplicity of the words...no useless metaphors....just plain desire!!!

"Sit by me,Silently…And let me know…You like me…"

luvd dese lines!!!

Lakshmi said...

@ Renju
:) Glad u liked it...

Lakshmi said...

@ Arvind
Thank you.

Lakshmi said...

@ BF
Hey...yeah.. I guess its simple words that make wonders...

:D Glad u liked it :D

Aw.S.M said...

awww...thats so sweet...and i like the pictures that go with it too...i like the fact tat it doesnt take much to make ur day..u r a happy person in general...gr8 trait

luv
amith

gkam said...

so sweet! :)

arvind said...

a caring nvr need a great amount of money..

but need a great space in the heart..

nice to hear - what a girl need as a CARE..

nice share..

Vishal Raj said...

Very nicely written. Touched my heart. True true emotion for love.

Chip said...

:)