Give me a smile…
Sing me a song…
Hug me tight…
Keep me close….
Walk with me…
Hold my hands…
Tell me a joke…
Hear me laugh…
Sit by me,
Silently…
And let me know…
You like me…
Take me to the ocean…
To watch the waves…
The dipping sun…
And the salty air…
Listen to me talk…
Look and nod…
Tell me stories…
I d love to hear…
Lend me a shoulder
To cry upon…
When something happens
That tears me apart…
Tell me you love me
That you care…
And whatever happens,
You’ll be there…
This is what it takes…
To make my day…
Simple though it may seem…
No one seems to care…
20 comments:
Wow...its cool...I like it
Nice list, wish u a lucky day!!! !!!! Hope this comment makes your day!!! :)
sweet n simple :)
nice lines!
simple things make a day:)
Have a nice day:)!
Cheers:)
@ JJ
Thank you :)
@ Dudo
It sure did :)
@ BE
Glad u liked it :)
@ Raksha
Thanks a lot... :D
Cute lines..just like the words spoken from a little child..
AWWW!
thank you for commenting up there or would have not arrived here so soon ^-^
I can sooo relate to this poem..
Innocence personified with amazing dignity!
A hug for you..( that's my trademark you see :D )
Loved it!
@ Leks
Hey... Thanks a lot.. U sure did make my day :D
A hug back :)
ho! its so nice..
luvd the simplicity of the words...no useless metaphors....just plain desire!!!
"Sit by me,Silently…And let me know…You like me…"
luvd dese lines!!!
@ Renju
:) Glad u liked it...
@ Arvind
Thank you.
@ BF
Hey...yeah.. I guess its simple words that make wonders...
:D Glad u liked it :D
awww...thats so sweet...and i like the pictures that go with it too...i like the fact tat it doesnt take much to make ur day..u r a happy person in general...gr8 trait
luv
amith
so sweet! :)
a caring nvr need a great amount of money..
but need a great space in the heart..
nice to hear - what a girl need as a CARE..
nice share..
Very nicely written. Touched my heart. True true emotion for love.
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